《秋夜寄邱员外》
Autumn Night: For Councilor Qiu

韦应物 （唐）
By Wei Yingwu (Tang Dynasty)

翻译：忒绿 (Tweeting Green)


怀君属秋夜，
The autumn night makes me miss you badly，

散步咏凉天。
I stroll around and chant the cool niceness.

空山松子落，
Pinecones fall amid the empty mountains,

幽人应未眠。
My anchorite might be as well sleepless.



注：英译每句十音节；二四句押尾韵。

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Wei Yingwu (Tang Dynasty)： Autumn Night: For Councilor Qiu

忒绿译


The autumn night makes me miss you badly，
I stroll around and chant the cool niceness.
Pinecones fall amid the empty mountains,
My anchorite might be as well sleepless.

（中译英）


秋夜寄邱员外

韦应物 （唐）


怀君属秋夜，
散步咏凉天。
空山松子落，
幽人应未眠。


注：英译每句十音节；二四句押尾韵。

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卞兆康 发表于 2023-12-30 10:10
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