忒绿诗歌 发表于 2023-3-26 06:56
Mist rains wet(ting) the shirt, unseen;
Carefree flowers fall(ling) to the ground, silent.

both wet and fall are a little bit direct and dull. what about some words more delicate and discreet?

Misty rains

Misty rain

青未 发表于 2023-3-25 21:45
细雨湿衣看不见，闲花落地听无声。———这两句， 忒绿翻译翻译～

Mist rains wet(ting) the shirt, unseen;
Carefree flowers fall(ling) to the ground, silent.

How?

细雨湿衣看不见，闲花落地听无声。———这两句， 忒绿翻译翻译～