Sound of Early Spring
by Tweeting Green

summer
"I heard it”
autumn
"I heard it”
winter
"I heard it"
it gets louder and louder
stirring and telling
spring
didn’t seem to hear it



早春的声音
文｜忒绿

夏
“听见了”
秋
“听见了”
冬
“听见了”

越来越响
越来越扣人心弦

春
“好像没听见”

细雨湿衣看不见，闲花落地听无声。———这两句， 忒绿翻译翻译～

青未 发表于 2023-3-25 21:45
细雨湿衣看不见，闲花落地听无声。———这两句， 忒绿翻译翻译～

Mist rains wet(ting) the shirt, unseen;
Carefree flowers fall(ling) to the ground, silent.

How?

Misty rain

Misty rains

忒绿诗歌 发表于 2023-3-26 06:56
Mist rains wet(ting) the shirt, unseen;
Carefree flowers fall(ling) to the ground, silent.

both wet and fall are a little bit direct and dull. what about some words more delicate and discreet?

青未君的要求太高了

青未 发表于 2023-3-26 11:07
both wet and fall are a little bit direct and dull. what about some words more delicate and discre ...

Misty rains damp the shirt, unseen;
Carefree petals flutter to the ground, silent.

どうですか？

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うん…まあまあかな。

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