深夜零点
洪娟

零点零分，列车穿出隧道
冲进浓黑的夜幕

车厢里，有人梦中轻唤幼子
有人不停翻身变换着睡姿
有人睁眼望向窗外

他们在同一趟列车上
却在不同的路途中


Midnight
Hong Juan

At 0: 00, the train passes through the tunnel
Rush into the dark night

In the carriage, someone called their youngest son in a dream
Someone keeps rolling over and changing their sleeping position
Someone opened their eyes and looked out of the window

They are on the same train
But on a different journey

欣赏好诗~
一二节的时态，和journey这句的单复数，如再完善完善会更好~

诗日历.世界诗歌网每日诗选681期拟选用，感谢方老师赐稿~

许剑桐 发表于 2022-5-20 16:23
欣赏好诗~
一二节的时态，和journey这句的单复数，如再完善完善会更好~

剑桐老师慧眼，我粗心了。

许剑桐 发表于 2022-5-20 16:25
诗日历.世界诗歌我每日诗选681期拟选用，感谢方老师赐稿~

谢谢剑桐老师！