荔荔 发表于 2024-4-19 11:02
额，，，又是一种解读。

避免与忒绿和林木重合，我翻译成这样了。忒绿的有韵脚，林木的有汉语节奏感， ...

虚无主义，好像是最高境界~

林木 发表于 2024-4-19 17:32
The answer has nothing to do with life or death, body or soul. 解谜高手，but are you so sure? 一首 ...

It depends
If we treat it as a riddle, then yes, there is a correct answer.
If we treat it like other poems, then yes, you're right; there is no one correct interpretation of a poem.
However, if we attempt to translate it into a different language, we should strive to keep the translation as close to the original as possible. Otherwise, it becomes a completely different poem.

荔荔好

青未君（习惯了这个称呼 ）译文简明达意。没有多也没用少了原著的意象。

更让人眼前一亮的是译文对词性和主谓宾转换的娴熟，让译文更加符合地道的中文表达，赞

要是每行八个字再加上尾韵就会更加完美地体现原著的原貌了

这样讨论一首诗歌充分体现了《世界诗歌网》的世界意义，不亦乐乎！谢谢青未君和木木

也谢谢无主题友友和更多的朋友加入讨论。

无主题 发表于 2024-4-19 23:42
It depends  
If we treat it as a riddle, then yes, there is a correct answer.
If we treat it  ...

It is both. literary translation is a recreation.

忒绿诗歌 发表于 2024-4-20 04:20
这样讨论一首诗歌充分体现了《世界诗歌网》的世界意义，不亦乐乎！谢谢青未君和木木

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