风景
作者：陆岸

世上还有什么风景，
比得上你年轻时遇见的一场大雪，
大雪上只有两个人的脚印。

俞伟远译

The View
By Lu’an

Never ever had been a view in the world
That could compare with the heavy snow met in your youth,
In the vast snowfield there were only two persons’ footprints.

Tr. Yu weiyuan
2022.1.15

欣赏好诗佳译。

许剑桐 发表于 2022-2-18 19:59
欣赏好诗佳译。

谢谢老师鼓励！

欣赏佳诗配佳译！

其实我对第一行的过去完成体有那么一丁点儿纠结~

许剑桐 发表于 2022-2-20 20:47
其实我对第一行的过去完成体有那么一丁点儿纠结~

嗯。用现在完成时更好。谢谢老师

俞伟远(浙江） 发表于 2022-2-21 14:20
嗯。用现在完成时更好。谢谢老师

每日诗选591期选用~

许剑桐 发表于 2022-2-23 13:15
每日诗选591期选用~

The View
By Lu’an

Never ever has been a view in the world
That could compare with the heavy snow met in your youth,
In the vast snowfield there were only two persons’ footprints.

谢谢！