MAKING A POEM

by Vihang A. Naik


To write a poem the pen
has to slide making a line

over a sheet. You see a
snake uncoil. Words bare
themselves. You come to know
what nakedness is a does.

Menaka’s charm works as a
Rule. A sage needs senses.
In this episode the pen runs
out of ink. Refill. The sound

of music resonates. Sheets flap.
The dance of the black ink and
little light. A poem is made.




创作一首诗

要创作一首诗，那么笔
必须得滑动，划出一条线

在纸上。你看到一条
伸展腰身的蛇。词语裸露出
自己。你逐渐知晓
does出现处，即裸露。

梅纳卡将她的魅力
施展成规则。圣人需要理性。
在这一章节，笔没有
墨水了。续上点墨。音乐

共鸣着。纸张翻飞。
黑色墨水和微弱的光在舞蹈
一首诗便创作成功。

(卞兆康译)

You come to know
what nakedness is a does. 这一句稀里糊涂地翻译了，有请各位方家

短句尤其精彩，感谢兆康分享～

does出现处，即裸露 。

青未 发表于 2023-9-16 09:08
短句尤其精彩，感谢兆康分享～

have a happy day!