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.爱情和春天一起苏醒
文|寒冰
译|李一凡

鞭炮叫醒沉睡的河床
浪花伸着懒腰
在梦里欢唱
梦里有一个美丽的哈密姑娘
骑着骏马驰骋在牧场
悠扬的牧羊曲传到耳旁
醉了你的梦乡

天山脚下
巴里坤大草原上
姑娘对着河流梳妆
她的长发像垂下的柳丝在风中飘荡
她的眼中流淌着一条河流
一直流到心爱的人心上
她那绚丽的艾德莱斯裙衫随风飘扬
柔美的腰肢把十二木卡姆跳响
优美的旋律随春风在心窝荡漾

沉睡的青年再一次梦到心爱的姑娘
寻着她的芳踪去追逐梦的远方

扛起精心置办的聘礼
乘东风坐云帆
趟河流越山峦
奔赴姑娘所在的地方

喜鹊在马背上鸣唱
姑娘思念着远方的情郎
披上朝霞迎着曙光
在鸣沙山张望    张望
鸣沙山最懂姑娘的愁肠
哼着欢快的乐曲
陪伴她浅吟低唱

情郎感应着姑娘的惆怅
腾云驾雾在天山徜徉
雪莲花在冰雪中开得圣洁漂亮
散发着幽幽清香
东北汉子有着火热的胸膛
不惧山高不怕寒凉
不能辜负心爱的姑娘
多想把它送给亲爱的姑娘

姑娘也嗅到雪莲的芬芳
听到了驼铃叮当
激动和喜悦在心中激荡
端起香甜的马奶酒
乳白的颜色和着多情的目光
等候在情郎来的路上

鞭炮声声响
炸开一双蝴蝶的翅膀
情感在春风中绽放
脚步将梦想丈量
你终于飞到姑娘身旁

春风拂过草原和山梁
小鸟叫醒积雪山旺
青了山,翠了柳,醉了好儿郎
野花簇拥着梦里的姑娘
爱情和春天一起疯狂

【诗评】
戴墨镜的阿Q读诗:    这是一首完美的爱情诗歌,以鞭炮齐鸣起笔,以鞭炮声落幕。澎湃的河流,应是酒醉后狂热的心声。沉浸在幸福中的男儿在做梦,拉开爱情的帷幕。
这是一首感人的爱情诗,且不说姑娘的美与歌声,凭这段曲折的爱情就能打动人心。全诗情节朴实无华,真实感强,故事情节委婉动人。作者娓娓道来,通过鸣沙山的回声(女孩子微笑的心事)、鹊儿报喜(迎亲的消息)、雪莲花开(爱情)、马奶酒的香醇(陶醉的目光)一步步把诗意推向高潮,又同时比喻爱情的纯洁和甜美。
感情细腻,全诗文笔流畅,语气和谐又富有韵律。读着让人精神振奋又回味无穷,爱情的力量也一发不可收拾。
寒冰笔下的爱情诗歌委婉,缠绵,一行行文字再现一个个真场景

Running for love

By Hanbing
Tr. Yifan Li

Firecrackers wake up the sleeping riverbed.
Waves sing in the low voice to a dream.
There is a beautiful girl from Hami in a boy's dream.
She rides a horse galloping in the pasture.
The melodious shepherd song stroking the boy's ears is already melted in his heart on its way to the girl.

In Barkol grassland, by the foot of TianShan Mountain, girl looks in the water making up.
Long hair of her looks like the soft branches of willow tree waves in the wind.
The river, in her eyes, is flowing into her sweetheart' s heart.
Her flowery dress waves in the wind.
The movements of her mellow figure follows the heavenly rhythm of Mugam, like honey dripping into her heart.
Again, the sleeping young man dreams of his girl.
He follows the scent of her dreamily to the poetic distance.
With all his possession loaded with, he passes through the mountains and rivers to the place the girl has been.

The magpie sings on the back of the horse when the girl misses her fancy man.
Being in the rosy dawn, she stands on the Echo Sand Mountain which learns her well looking forward to the arrival of the boy.
The boy feels her melancholy and speed up like flying.
With its emitting of the faint scent the snow lotus beautifully blooms in the snow.
With the scorching hot burning up in his heart, the boy wants eagerly flying to the girl.

The girl smells the fragrance of the snow lotus and hears the camal bell when the outburst of her excitement act with no even the least control.
Pouring kumiss into the cup emotionally she waits for sweetheart's arrival.

When firecrackers are set off the flowers of love bloom in the spring wind.
Spring wind stroke the grass and mountains.
Birds wake up the frozen ice, love and spring sing together
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