▋風 暴
鐵包金

指尖卷起的，琴声卷起的
追逐的梦卷起的；以及内心激荡卷起的
－－風暴
我置身于情绪風暴之中
在風暴里鼓琴

琴声饱满，膨胀
音乐气场形成巨大的漩涡。漩涡卷起的風暴
替你，替我。掩埋忧傷


Storms
Tie Baojin

Fingertips rolled, lyres rolled, dreams chased,
and storms rolled by inner turmoil.
I was in the middle of an emotional storm.
Playing the violin in the storm.

The sound was full and swells
Musical air fields form huge vortexes.
The vortex has swirled into a storm.
For you, for me. Bury your sorrows.

译/梵君



▋剩下的声音开始下雪
鐵包金

一个沉默的声音，有着隐秘的忧傷
暗淡，萎靡，伴着困扰低吟
始終未被另一个声音唤醒。练习发声术
偶然的气息脱缰，从声音里掏出野马的嘶鸣

气息流动在持续里，充满水与火的过程
深度修改声音的含义
让感动的声音感动自己。打开气息之門
放困扰出去
剩下的声音开始下雪，隐藏的遗憾已无力唱出
我在抽象的声音里，愈发抽象着自己

点燃的，众声的火焰
将全部含义燃烧成灰烬。一个沉默的声音
对此暗淡了整个人生


The rest of the voices started snowing.
Tie Baojin

A silent voice, with a secret sadness.
Dull, dispirited, with a troubled whisper.
Still not awakened by another voice. Practicing Vocalizations
The occasional breath off the reins, pulling out of the sound the whinnying of wild horses

Breath flows in a continuous process, filled with water and fire.
The meaning of deep modifying sounds
Let the sound that moves you move you. Open the door to the breath.
Let it out.
The rest of the voices began to snow, and the hidden regrets were no longer able to be sung
I am abstracting myself more and more in the sound of abstraction

Ignited, the Flame of the Voices
Burning all meaning to ashes. A silent voice.
It's darkened my whole life.


译/梵君

第一首中的rolled给了我卷香烟的画面 点燃风暴抽一口。

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