不能朗诵的岁月
文｜忒绿

岁月是不能朗诵的。
只能让你记住的，
是诗，
一点都不浪漫。
时间是水，
白白的，流来；
白白的，流走。
谁
敲响了谁的铃铛？
涟漪织成看不见的网。
一片舟，一副桨。
一下一下，
划进星夜的心湖。
叶子落下，树有些晃动。
风
摇落了记忆。
摸我的脸，张了张嘴，
没说出话来。


Years Cannot Be Recited

years cannot be recited
only for you to remember
is poetry
not romantic at all
time is water
coming over in vain
and in vain flowing away
who
rings whose bell?
ripples weave an invisible web
a boat with a pair of oars
bit by bit
paddles into the profound lake of the starry night
the leaves falling and the tree shaking a little
winds
blow off the memory
touching my face
my mouth slightly open
no words mutter out

Will post more

I like your comments. Thanks to both of you:

忒绿诗歌 发表于 2023-3-11 04:16
Good point. Thank you:thanks:

sorry to mislead you.   any new translation recently?

忒绿诗歌 发表于 2023-3-11 04:15
It’s poetry or a poem that only for you to remember. It’s good in grammar

with a fresh brain on this spring morning, i suddenly find myself wrong.   yes, it’s perfect in grammar.

Good point. Thank you:thanks:

It’s poetry or a poem that only for you to remember. It’s good in grammar

桐编好：）握手:

忒绿诗歌 发表于 2023-3-2 08:01
The final version

years cannot be recited
only for you to remember
are poetries


—————— poetries？ poetry itself is a collective noun.  what confuses me is the whole sentence in terms of grammar.

学习兄好译！