Qi Fengyan: On the 9th Day of the 9th Lunar Month

翻译：齐凤艳


On the 9th Day of the 9th Lunar Month

Seeing in mind an array of wild geese flying over mountains,
Stroking the setting sun with a bunch of dogwoods
To near the poem high above,

I do not look into the remote.
Hometown is in my blood, though feet
Away from the earth.
Accompanying me before the window,
The wind’s breaths smell of wine,
I raise a cup to the mirror like glass.

Staring at part of my body and my face
In which your shadow remains,
I do not speak, I listen to your songs,
The crescent moon uplifting dews,
I uplifting my memory of you.


汉译英

齐凤艳


九月初九日

从山里   剥离出雁阵
抚摸落日，一把茱萸接近
诗句，高出头顶

我，不遥望
故乡珍藏在血液里，双脚
早已离开泥土
风陪我临窗
它唤酒
我对镜空举杯

我一部分的身体。脸
残留着你的影
我不说话，只听你唱歌
月牙升起露水
我，升起你

The wind's breaths smell of wine
英译比中文的多了些身临其境的feel哈哈~ 问好老师。

人土土 发表于 2020-10-25 08:36
The wind's breaths smell of wine
英译比中文的多了些身临其境的feel哈哈~ 问好老师。

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