芦苇花奏鸣曲
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栖在芦苇上
一羽
喜欢读《诗经》的鸟
湖水的象征 天空
一丝不挂的时候是蓝色的
可以是一种火焰
让人燃烧
不是因为可以煮酒
平湖一样的镜子
里外是
一样的秋月
我打坐在露滴之上
是何处
吹响一曲羌笛


Sonata of Reed Flowers By Tweeting Green

birds born on the reeds
fond of reading The Book of Odes
picture of the lake
the sky
blue when it sheds all its veils
it can be a flame
igniting hearts
not because it brews wine
mirror-like stillness of the lake
reflecting inside and out
the same autumn moon
I meditate on a dewdrop
unsure of where
a melody of Qiang flute arises



石子
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我看见
一粒石子丢进湖里
溅起一掬水花
不久，会有芽发出来


Little Pebble By Tweeting Green

I saw a little pebble
thrown into the lake
splashed up a handful of water—
soon, a sprout will emerge out

赞绿绿好诗好译

栖在芦苇上
一羽

—— 开题相当惊艳。

这首诗的前大半我都非常喜欢……

Little Pebble By Tweeting Green

I saw a little pebble
thrown into the lake
splashed up a handful of water—
soon, a sprout will emerge out


—— 很灵动的小诗诗。赞……

林木 发表于 2025-6-2 16:22
赞绿绿好诗好译

木木好，谢谢来读。握

荔荔 发表于 2025-6-3 12:15
栖在芦苇上
一羽

嗨，荔荔君，不兴说一半留一半的哟，想知道省略号里是什么:

荔荔 发表于 2025-6-3 12:17
Little Pebble By Tweeting Green

I saw a little pebble

感谢荔荔君认真赏读每首诗是不是石头发芽合情合理

这是《AllPoetry》英文诗歌网上的一位诗友对这首诗的留评：UnearthlyDemagogue - Just when you're about to float off into the ether, the soul-stirring cry of that Qiang flute brings you back, right back to where the heart remembers, maybe a little homesick for something you can't quite name

忒绿诗歌 发表于 2025-6-4 08:14
嗨，荔荔君，不兴说一半留一半的哟，想知道省略号里是什么:

我要回忆一下，

忒绿诗歌 发表于 2025-6-4 08:19
感谢荔荔君认真赏读每首诗是不是石头发芽合情合理

石头发芽，多创意，多诗意，多情意