雨
雷蒙德·卡佛

今天早晨醒来
只想一整天都赖床
看书。纠结了一会儿。

然后看窗外的雨。
不再纠结。把自己整个
放进早晨这场雨的掌控。

我愿意重新活一次吗？
犯一些不可原谅的错误？
我愿意，只要有一点机会。我都愿意



Rain

Raymond Carver

Woke up this morning with
a terrific urge to lie in bed all day
and read. Fought against it for a minute.

Then looked out the window at the rain.
And gave over. Put myself entirely
in the keep of this rainy morning.



卞兆康译

英文最后貌似少了一节呢？

雷蒙德·卡佛：雨

卞兆康译


今天早晨醒来
只想一整天都赖床
看书。纠结了一会儿。

然后看窗外的雨。
不再纠结。把自己整个
放进早晨这场雨的掌控。

我愿意重新活一次吗？
犯一些不可原谅的错误？
我愿意，只要有一点机会。我都愿意

（英译中）


Rain

By Raymond Carver


Woke up this morning with
a terrific urge to lie in bed all day
and read. Fought against it for a minute.

Then looked out the window at the rain.
And gave over. Put myself entirely
in the keep of this rainy morning.

Would I live my life over again?
Make the same unforgivable mistakes?
Yes, given half a chance. Yes.

青未 发表于 2024-1-22 10:32
雷蒙德·卡佛：雨

卞兆康译

谢谢青未