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坐在楼檐边，
你的腿被风吹的
空中游荡

脚下马路上车水马龙
你看着像蜗牛爬一样的公共汽车
感觉要加入他们

想了很久了
抱着最大勇气写了情书
示爱 回绝
没什么可以留恋的了
既然今生找不到爱
来世碰碰运气吧
既然出生无声无息
不如让死亡光芒四射
深呼吸，站起来
倒上汽油，点火
你全身像个火球
坠

远处一个小孩兴奋的叫道
妈妈 我看见了一颗彗星






Self Immolation

Sitting at the edge of the building

Blowing by the wind

Your legs dangling in the air



Underneath, busy street

Bus crawling like a snail

Feeling like I could join them



Thought this for long time

Written love letter with full strength

Rejected



Nothing to worry about

If I cannot find love in this lifetime

Try it in the next

If you were born without any noise

Why not let die a shining star



Take a deep breath

Stand up

Pour gasoline, light it up

You burning like a fireball

Falling



A child from afar crying out loud

Mum, I saw a comet......

Blowing by the wind（为何不用被动式）

_李世纯_ 发表于 2021-8-7 15:12
Blowing by the wind（为何不用被动式）

诗歌上不是按照常用规则，好像我的腿被风吹，在这里，blowing by the wind,更主动，更诗意，还有，外国人觉得这样写是对的